Revision Issue Project One

Post
In the appropriate Conference on our WebBoard (Your Group; Revision One), post about something you are finding challenging in the revision of your first project.  This should be a content issue rather than a grammatical one.  If possible, copy a sample section of the paper into the post for the responders to work with.  For example, if you are having trouble with level of detail, post a paragraph where your peer reviewers suggested you needed more detail.  if the trouble is generating enough material, post an outline of what you have.

Response
In response to two of your group members' posts, write a brief (5-10 sentence) suggestion on how they might tackle the problem.  Suggest details they might add, or material they might cover, or ways they might clarify.