Revision Issue Three

Post
In the appropriate Conference on our WebBoard (Your Group; Revision Three), post about something you are finding challenging in the revision of your third project.  This should be a content issue rather than a grammatical one.  If possible, copy a sample section of the paper into the post for the responders to work with.  For example, if you are having trouble with the rhetorical terms, post a paragraph where your peer reviewers commented on your use of them.  If the trouble is generating enough material, post an outline of what you have.

Response
In response to two of your group members' posts, write a brief (5-10 sentence) suggestion on how they might tackle the problem.  Suggest details they might add, or material they might cover, or ways they might clarify.