Sample Paragraph Post and Analysis

Post
In the appropriate Conference on our WebBoard (Your Group; Sample Paragraphs), post a sample paragraph from each letter that highlight the differences between the two.  What would be best is if you used paragraphs that talked about the same factual experience/event, so that we could see the differences in how you portray them.

Response
Write a brief (5-10 sentence) analysis of two of your group members' sample paragraphs.  How did they create the competing impressions?  What might they do to make those impressions more distinct?